Thursday, 4 August 2016

Descriptive olympic writing

Usain Bolt and other contestants were in a colossal stadium with a tremendous crowd cheering and shouting. Usain Bolt was getting ready to race in a 100m run. He was a little bit nervous but he was determined to win. Flashing cameras filled the stadium and the other contestants were almost ready to race.

The time has come. All the contestants got ready with their starting blocks. “Ready?... Set…BANG!” All the contestants ran with all their might. Usain Bolt was behind at first but then he darted across the track and got to the finish line in about 9.64 seconds.

Usain Bolt is panting on the ground and trying to get energy back. Eventually he got up and everybody was shouting and cheering and Usain Bolt was happy. He got another gold medal and he was very tired. The contestants that didn’t get a medal were very depressed. The crowd was taking even more photos than before. The noise grew louder and noisier as people cheered.

1 comment:

  1. What a great piece of writing Josh. I really liked the description that you have used and the information that you have included to make your story super interesting!